One of my clients recently asked if I had any good write-up on best practices on how to write professional & effective email subject lines. I was surprised and I thought who would need a write-up or a guideline on a topic as simple as writing effective email subject lines. I mean, did we ever went through any tutorial to learn how to play a PC game (popular in late 1990’s and early 2000)! However, upon closer observation, I realized that professionals are too busy with their work, and hence, are more concerned with the email body text rather than subject lines. So I started researching on “reading psychology”. With some A/B testing and my past experience, I compiled a list of “Before vs. After” effective email subject lines to help you decide best. A quick 2-mins read would help brush up some important user-friendly practices.
Before: Fwd: CV for Job After: CV – Marketing Manager [reference: Rishikesh Mehta] Tip #2 – Use reference tags (importance status) Before: March 2016 Travel Cost Approval Pending After: March 2016 Travel Cost Approval Pending [Important] Emails may also be sent to 3rd parties who may not use Outlook. Hence, adding status tags and version name can add to the clarity in communication. Example: Send Budget 2016-17 v3.0 [URGENT]
Very often, you access email on the move, esp. on Mobile Smartphones. Simple messages which require an acknowledgment can be framed like this: Example: PitchBook v3.0 received [eom] where eom> refers to “end of mail”. This tells the reader that there is no need to read the body of the text.
Tip #4: Follow up emails wrongly sent earlier Example:
Budget 2016-17 v3.0 resent [Ignore Previous]
Tip #5: Indicate timeline
Before: New Tariff Chart After: New Tariff Chart pan India – effective 1 June 2016 Before: Excel Training After: Invitation: Excel Training – Mumbai – 25 April 2016
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Tip #6: Indicate response type Before:
Social Media Strategy Meeting After: Request for Meeting – Social Media Strategy – Thursday Other examples: – Invitation: Excel Training – Mumbai – 25 April 2016 – Approval needed: 3 days casual leave next week – Invoice Copy attached – March 2016 dispatch [for records]
Tip #7: Reminders & Follow-up
– Reminder: March 2016 Travel Cost Approval Pending – Sent again: March 2016 Travel Cost Approval Pending
Tip #8: Sending Attachments (version no. with tag)
– Travel Requisition Form attached v5.2 – Travel Budget 2016-17 [attachment]
Tip #9: Use correct spelling to enhance searchability
Before: Social Media Strategy Meeting After: Social Media Strategy Meeting
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Tip #10: Obvious Dont’s (CAPS and fillers)
– REMINDER: MARCH 2016 TRAVEL COST APPROVAL PENDING – It was nice to meet you – Hi NB – Our latest course on “Outlook Ninja: Tips and Tricks” has been released.